Friday 26 August 2022

Booked on a Feeling by Jayci Lee

This is a sweet book with characters to love and descriptions of food to make you salivate. I really wanted to give it five stars, but there were a couple of issues. It did, apparently, have an editor. It's... not noticeable.

There are passages of head-hopping that I had to read over to get the gist, which pulled me out of the story. POV changed between scenes, giving me literary whiplash. And there were mistypes (him instead of her is the stand-out instance)

It's such a shame, because other than these problems, it's a lovely book. It deserved more time being polished.

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